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| Shin ATproof 586th Post
 
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|  "My Guilty Gear character..."
, posted Fri 31 May 17:24
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I finally got around to finishing my first Guilty Gear fanfic Character...when you're done reading it let me know what you think and vote on the Poll.
Name: Kiss
Gender: Male
Height: 6'1
Weight: 250
Hair: Black
Eyes: Green
Birthdate: March, 3 1974
Nationality: American
Occupation: Musician, Bounty Hunter
Favorite Food: Curry & Gyoza
Hobbies: Making music, Party, Video games, Anime
Story:
Born on the streets of Detroit Kiss learned to play music before he could walk. At the age of 5 he was already recording songs and by the age of 10 made his first album with his band "Parasite" that went multi platinum. The hottest Heavy Metal band in the world had it all but their leader, Kiss met a tragic end when he came down with a mysterious illness and died at the age of 32. Soon after the day the Gears went rogue a source of raw magic was found near the old grave of Kiss. His body was reanimated with raw magic and he clawed his way out of his casket to the surface and realized a world much different from his, no more where the great cities he knew...now nothing more than a barren wasteland. Kiss was discovered by a group of nomads were were wandering the desert. They took him in and treated to Kiss' needs and brought him back to health. He learned of the year it was and where is now known as the "Badlands". In total shock Kiss tried to come to terms of his new life. His name, fame and band were long forgotten in time and in this chaotic future. To his delight Rock and Roll was still around and soon Kiss was living his new life making new songs and when playing in a small bar. One night while singing, the stage was set a blaze by an accidental fire. Kiss shout in the microphone for help and then the flames were frozen. It was Kiss that stopped the fire. To the crowd and Kiss' amazement he had a natural ability of Para-Magic. Kiss seeked out to hone his abilities in Magic to become a wizard. When Kiss sings he is able to preform various forms of elemental magic. Combined Heavy Metal with Magic Kiss wishes to make the best shows on Earth. Kiss becomes a Bounty Hunter to get money to support his dream to rise to the top again with his second chance in life. "Beware the singing wizard" is advice all wanted men remind themselves constantly. Rumors pass around the world of a man who fights with a microphone & stand using unseen magic abilities in the name of justice and music.
Special attacks:
Black Diamond(   )-A ice lance projectile slightly controllable can be done in the air
Strutter(  )-An advancing counter move when it counters Kiss runs behind the opponent
Shout it out loud(  , or  )-An Anti-air move where Kiss makes the ground spike up, depending on the attack button the range can vary
Love Gun( )-Kiss points his finger like a gun and shoots stream of water
Hotter than Hell( )-A grab move where Kiss makes a pillar of fire that engulfs the opponent
Magic Touch( , , or )-Kiss Snaps his fingers and a lightning bolt drops from the sky, depending of the attack button the range can vary
Override:
Exciter( )-Kiss begins to glow and all of his specials gain double strength for 10 seconds
In your face-( )-Kiss opens his mouth and a gaint blast of wind hits the opponent
Instant Kill:
Rock and Roll All Night-( )Kiss uppercuts the opponent with the microphone stand then sings a high note then does some head banging and a mosh pit runs in and stomps the opponent to death.
Intros:
Normal Intro:
"Are you ready to rock?"
VS Sol:
Kiss-"Let's see who is the best Bounty Hunter!"
Sol-"You want the best you got the best!"
VS Axl:
Axl-"WOW! I remember hearing about you as a kid!"
Kiss-"Well then...want an autograph and special performance?"
VS I-No:
Kiss-"They call me Dr.Love."
I-No-"I don't care."
Kiss-"We could make great music together!"
I-No-"Shut up and fight!"
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| NARUTO 541th Post
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| "Re(1):My Guilty Gear character..." , posted Sun 2 Jun 06:55
Well shin AY proof my friend, this guy looks good with some minor bad point.
He's story made him a cross over of zappa and I-no somewhere. but not really bad, be quiet.
For the moves, good job, but it need in my opinion some minor change, like the ice shoot is something we have seem 100 times in a fighting game, so do the flame shot for exemple.
Try to find something like a energy shot with a special form...an pics of him as an autograph for exemple....
His name to, it remeber the old group"KISS", maybe that why you do it, try to put something behind like a full name: "kiss my heart", if you see what I meen?
Well just think about it, but since it's an hard job to create something like that you've done a good job!
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| Shin ATproof 600th Post
Red Carpet Regular Member
| "Re(2):My Guilty Gear character..." , posted Mon 3 Jun 14:52
quote:
Well shin AY proof my friend, this guy looks good with some minor bad point.
He's story made him a cross over of zappa and I-no somewhere. but not really bad, be quiet.
For the moves, good job, but it need in my opinion some minor change, like the ice shoot is something we have seem 100 times in a fighting game, so do the flame shot for exemple.
Try to find something like a energy shot with a special form...an pics of him as an autograph for exemple....
His name to, it remeber the old group"KISS", maybe that why you do it, try to put something behind like a full name: "kiss my heart", if you see what I meen?
Well just think about it, but since it's an hard job to create something like that you've done a good job!
Right on...thanks Naruto for the review...I'll consider your words in my editing. My friend and I are working on a Guilty Gear fanfic and coming up with new characters and moves that we would like to see in a Guilty Gear game...kind of a hobby when we get REALLY bored heheheh...I should get to working on that Maki FAQ though...
Hey anyone else have suggestions? Please post something if you got something to add here...thanks ^_^
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