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| Time Mage 500th Post
 
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|  "500th post. Wow."
, posted Sun 12 May 10:58
Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'l ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improove. If you find a repetitive mistake of me, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written...
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| justicekyo
130th Post
Regular Customer
| "Re(1):500th post. Wow." , posted Sun 12 May 11:30
quote:
Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'l ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improove. If you find a repetitive mistake of me, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written...
your english sounds not bad to me... understand it perfectly i can...
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| Jazzie D 1022th Post
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| "Yoku dekamashita!" , posted Sun 12 May 11:33
quote:
Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'l ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improove. If you find a repetitive mistake of me, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written...
Congrats to ya!
Um, your English has been great. You have made a few errors, but still, solid overall. Nice way to utilize your celebration. Of course, the Kero-chan one is the coolest one.
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| Toxico 1888th Post
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| "Re(1):500th post. Wow." , posted Sun 12 May 12:11:
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Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'l ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improove. If you find a repetitive mistake of me, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written...
Your Engrish is pretty much standar English, unlike mine... on "If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home." It should say If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I wasn't suited to be here, but now I'm like in home.
You made don't make the most crucial mistake of my Engrish, I use words that I do not understand fully (Though I do that with my Zpanish also).
Congratulations on your achievement, though you are by far away ignorant from my evil schemes. I SUCK!
You have know how to avoid the SNK translating rutines.
[this message was edited by Toxico on Sun 12 May 14:04] |
| Iron D 1709th Post
Tailored Carpet V.I.P- Platinum Member
| "Re(1):500th post. Wow." , posted Sun 12 May 14:38
Congratulations on your 500th post. You're halfway to the quad digits club.
Not to be a show off, but if you want me to be a critic, I'll edit the entire last paragraph of your post. All corrections are in bold typing:
"I want you to be critical. Please post any mistake that I've made, because this is meant to help me improove(one o in improve). If you find a mistake I've made repeatedly, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my English...You(the word "you" is lower case, and the word "English" is capitalized) have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written..."
I'm honestly impressed with your English, seeing as it is your second language. All the corrections I've made were pretty much nitpicky as far as casual conversation goes. So feel free to disregard my corrections, although you did say to be critical...
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| TheBeast 344th Post
Bronze Customer
| "Re(1):500th post. Wow." , posted Sun 12 May 18:26
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Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I didn't suited here, but now I'm like in home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'l ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improove. If you find a repetitive mistake of me, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, I don't think even that this post is perfectly written...
You are too modest. Your English is good and I understand perfectly what you said. Congrats on your 500th post!
Anyway, just wondering what institution are you currently in and what major are you doing right now? Don't forget I am still sourcing for more difficult Maths problems to challenge you!!!
The only antidote to my poison is death...Hey! No fair! You have a resurrection move??
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| RugalBernstein 1808th Post
Silver Carpet V.I.P- Platinum Executive
| "Re(1):500th post. Wow." , posted Sun 12 May 18:33
Your English is excellent! ^_^ I've transcribed your post, and made fixes to it, though. See if you can find what I changed, so you can learn the mistakes yourself. ^_^
Hehe, Finally, I've reached 500 posts. If I have to be sincere, at first I thought I wasn't suited here, but now it's like a home.
To make this post a little more useful, I'll ask you a question:
-What do you think about my english?
I want you to be a critic. Please, post any mistake you remember I've made, because this is meant to help me improve. If you find a repetitive mistake of mine, please post it. And, if you haven't encountered anything bad about my english... You have to be blind!! No, seriously, even I don't think that this post is perfectly written...
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"Re(2):500th post. Wow." 
ok i'm blind then -_- you speak perfect english, man. i haven't noticed any mistakes yet 
