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| Dr Baghead 764th Post
 
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|  "Re(2):Opinions wanted."
, posted Thu 28 Mar 14:42
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What's the name of the comic? Crimson eyes? What's it all about? Is chibi Onslaught on the T-shirt of that guy? Will you draw splash pages as well?
The name of the comic is "All I Ask" (although it might change at some point... Crimson Eyes is actually a 'prequel', see the girl whose making out with her boy friend in the last two pannels? Crimson Eyes is basically their origin story... the other girl and the guy with 'Happy Death' shirt are my friend/co-writer's orginal characters)
What's it about. In the nut shell: Two demon hunters of conflicting personalities are given missions by the dead mother of the girl from Crimson Eyes. I guess it's comparable to Dirty Pair Flash and Slayers in terms of character dynamics and occational wackiness, although it takes place in "modern" (2030) times. It also contains elements of many world reiligions, the basic story is not unlike that of the Rayamana (the main heros are related Rama and Hanumat, while the major villian is Ravana's son), there are numerous Christian mythos tossed in (bibical names and characters are featured through out), and in the their are four invicinible weapons owned by several non-main hero characters named after the Four Gods from Japanese mythology (Byakko, Suzaku, Genbu, and Seiryu.) It's also the middle part of triology of comics (and exist in universe that has now spanned to 6 comics)
it wasn't suppost to be Chibi-Onslaught on that guys shirt (but rather a smiling skull) but in the final version I think it will be... that could be rather funny...
forgive my stupidity but what's a splash page?
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| Dr Baghead 767th Post
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| "Re(2):Opinions wanted." , posted Fri 29 Mar 13:55
A complete run down! I'm honored for such an evaluation!
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First one would look fine, but somehow I'm doubting you want to go with that.
I go with the first one if I could ^_^' took me like 30 minutes to get from pencil rough to final ink making that... though it looks sort of unprofessional...
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Second technique I could see working, with better line-work. That's not the best example though...
This is a rough page, most of the backgrounds were replaced with the "scare crow" lines... though I agree it's not the best.
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hird one looks most authentic to me. I'd go with that one based on just these examples.
^_^' geez, I go to sleep for the night and now this one is the crowd favorite... It looks a bit odd to me, and the markers are bit pricy and hard to use right... but if everyone thinks they look that good I might use them once in awhile
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Fourth one is darker and kind of blurrier than the third.
I most certainly will scan in color if I use markers, this one was an experiment... for some reason I think of Oz when I see it ^_^'
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fifth one is way too dark.
They're at a concert at night time in an open air stadium (it makes total sense when you read the whole comic ^_^') so it makes sense it would be dark... but agreed, black boarder is really too dark.
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Sixth one is better than the fifth because of the borders but still too dark.
this is the one my friend and comic co-creater liked best, and since her vote out weighs all of yours I'll probably go with it... however seeing as how 3 is very popular and not impossible to do (just trickier then photoshop) it will probably make it's way into the final comics as well (for some reason I see 3 as working great on flash backs and dreams, it has a sort of hazy look to it)
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"Re(2):Opinions wanted." 
The others are O.K. except for the first one,a bit sloppy. 
